Тема по английскому "Work"

I think the society obviously benefits from the work of its members. And two groups of the main contributors are artists and scientists. Both scientists and artists try to satisfy people’s needs and wants. The scientists improve our technology, medicine and the other branches of science. These people help us to know a lot of different things about the world we live in, about each other, about the forces of nature.
In reference to artists, it’s worth mentioning that they deal with the thing science can’t reach. I mean a human soul. Science can cure your physical pain, can help you to make your work easier, but only art can make you happy, relaxed and easy-going.

I think the society obviously benefits from the work of its members. And two groups of the main contributors are artists and scientists. Both scientists and artists try to satisfy people’s needs and wants. The scientists improve our technology, medicine and the other branches of science. These people help us to know a lot of different things about the world we live in, about each other, about the forces of nature.
In reference to artists, it’s worth mentioning that they deal with the thing science can’t reach. I mean a human soul. Science can cure your physical pain, can help you to make your work easier, but only art can make you happy, relaxed and easy-going.